2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and Man Computer is a tool whose aim is to help us work well.Nowadays,computers have became a part of our lives and play more and more important role.In the one place,it can help us work and solve these problems we run into in work to improve us efficiency.In the other place,it can relax us lives,such as watching a film and playing computer games.