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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中从句的使用的有点少了；作者词汇量积累需要继续努力，尤其高级词汇还有很大提升空间，另外拼写检查还需加强。
Because science and technologe devolent ,hardly everone have a mobile phone ever computer. More and more people "face to face"in their moblie phonr and computer,they chat with their parents or friend. They were no see another people’s face ,just hear that voice.So they were meeting is few. But,even if is that,cxplain whether electronic communication can’t replace face-to-facecontact,because of a lot of something slove need face-to-face. Such as parents love and miss .
