Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文章词汇表达灵活恰当,也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇;从句使用量不足。
Because science and technology develop ,hardly everyone had a mobile phone ever computer. More and more people "face to face"in their mobile phone and computer,they chat with their parents or friend. They were no see another people’s face ,just hear that voice.So they were meeting is few. But,even if is that,cxplain whether electronic communication can’t replace face-to-facecontact,because of a lot of something slove need face-to-face. Such as parents love and miss .