2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

作者能较丰富地使用高级词汇，但词汇量不大，且存在拼写错误；从句数量偏少，应增加文中从句和复合句的使用；衔接词较为不错，但文章结构不严谨。

The Mid-autumn Festival is one of the traditional program of China. When the day come, under normal conditions everyone come they home celebrily with they parents, such as enjoy the full moon and eating moon cakes.Of couse, have some people no come back their home also.They choose to tarvel with theirs friends or theyself. Another person select meeting theirs friend.