2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

从句数量偏少，应增加文中从句和复合句的使用；文中高级词汇的使用比较灵活，但有个别拼写错误；衔接词较为不错，但文章结构不严谨。

The Mid-autumn Festival is one of the traditional programs of China. When the day come, under normal conditions everyone come they home celebrily them parents, such as enjoy the full moon and eating moon cakes.Of couse, have some people no came back their home also.They choose to tarvel with theirs friends or theyself. Another person select meeting them friend.