2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

文章使用了较丰富的词汇表达，高级词汇的使用也较灵活多样；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

The Mid-autumn Festival is one of the traditional programs of China. When the day come, under normal conditions everyone come they home celebrily them parents, such as enjoy the full moon and eating moon cakes.Of cause, have some people no came back to their home also.They choose to travel with theirs friends or themself. Another person select meeting some friend.