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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40866
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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文章衔接手法恰当;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;文章用词灵活多样,但请注意增用高级词汇,单词拼写还要加强。

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It is not wise to make a conclusion by seeing or hearing someting at once, on account of the truth is always being buried. Pride and prejudice are the weakness of us human beings. When i was young,my father told me that whenever you want to judge someone, you just remember not everyone has the adventages that you have. I still can feel the shame when my father told me that. It was about ten years ago, when i were a little girl i can't go home by myself, so my father picked up me every day. In a usually afternoon, i saw a boy in my classroom turnover the garbage can one to one in a quite street. I was surpise for his behaviour, then i cried to him "Don't break the gabage can." He was frightened look at me, and ran as quickly as he could. I was pride to tell my father what i had do just now and i was waiting for my father's prise. However, my father's face became fale, he told me seriously, it is not the all truth what i was see.With time goes by, i know what's meaning my father's words.The boy don't have a rich family, and he need to survival.

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