文章衔接手法恰当;请作者增加高级词汇的使用,单词拼写做的很好;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量。
It is not wise to come to a conclusion by seeing or hearing something at once, on account of the truth is always buried. Pride and prejudice are the weakness of us human beings. When I was young, my father told me that whenever you want to judge someone, you just remember that not everyone has the advantages that you have. I am still shamed of when I think of what my father told me. It was about ten years ago, when I were a little girl I can't go home by myself, so my father picked up me every day. In an usually afternoon, i saw a boy in my classroom turnover the garbage can one to one in a quiet street. I was surprised for his behaviour, then I cried to him "Don't break the garbage can." He was frightened looking at me, and ran as quickly as he could. I was pride to tell my father what i had do just now and i was waiting for my father's prise. However, my father's face became fale, he told me seriously, it is not all the truth what i was see.With time goes by, I know what's the meaning my father's words. The boy didn't have a rich family, and he need to survival.
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