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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10391
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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文章词汇表达丰富,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;从句数量偏少,且文中有几处句子错误;文中衔接词丰富。

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Everyone behaviors cautiously in modern times.It is a common knowlodge that it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.Imagine that,once your only basket was broken,all your eggs are lost. One should think thoroughly in order to avoid the circumstance. Preparation is vital not only for green-hand,we know,but also for everyone in one's career.Putting all eggs in one basket means that all your asset is in danger or in interest without any second-hand preparation.Life is changeable,however.We can not predict what is going to happen next day.So it is neccessary for us to get preparation in advance. In conclusion,it is not advisable to put all eggs in one basket.We are supposed to prevent some futural risks by getting preparation at now.

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