2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文中词汇表达较为丰富，但高级词汇比较少，单词拼写要也加强；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词。

A most interesting place Dear friend: How is everyting going? According to your last letter,you said that you want to visit my hometown.I am very happy when i heard this exciting message.Of coure,i will take you to see the places of interesting. One of the most beautiful places is the Great Wall.It has a long history from Qing Dnasty.