2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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As the levo of live increasing, more and more children rely they parents very much.Now, a lot of parents do everything of their baby, such as wash the clothes or clearn the room. Because do that long time, they children can't do everything when they growing up. If they want to let their children independence, they must be encourge their children do something, let children have more power of their life.