2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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As the live levo increasing, more and more children rely they parents very much.Now, an army of parents do everything of their baby, such as washing the clothes or clearn the room. Because do that long time, they children can't do everything when they growing up. If they want to their children independence, they must encourage their children do something, let children have more power of their life.