2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

从句数量偏少；词汇表达不够丰富，要增加高级词汇的使用；层次欠清晰。

As the levo of live increasing, more and more children rely they parents very much.Now, an army of parents do everything of their baby, such as washing the clothes otherwise clear the room. Because do that long time, children can't do everything when they growing up. Provided that they want to their children independence, they must encourage their children do something, let children have more power of their life.