高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

请作者增加高级词汇的使用，单词拼写做的很好；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练。

Many years ago,my senior high school teacher told me a deep and eternal words.It is”Learn to do things,do small things.Learn to be a man,be a good person.” For so many years,this sentence still has inspired me when I was faced with setbacks or the mood was low. Maybe everyone is more or less faced with difficulties.Everyone’s heart has a boundless and indistinct Gobi desert.The cause of our life is to make this piece of Gobi desert full of beautiful flowers.In the journey of our life,there is a smooth road,but also a tough path.There are brilliant flowers,but also are thorns.There is the joy of success,but also the frustration of failure.Last year,I missed the national entrance examination for postgraduate.At that time,I was very sad.But I still believed in the best preparation for tomorrow is doing you best today.Always the words of my senior high school teacher rang in my ear.In order to do great things,you need to start from the small things.From then on,I worked hard,while tried to review.This year,I successfully passed the national graduate entrance examination.Up to now,I am still grateful to my teacher what had given me the advice. Sometimes,I feel very lucky.In the face of the unknown future,I need to keep a positive and optimistic heart to face the complex journey.As the old saying goes,”Where there is a will,there is a way.” Therefore,opening our hearts to meet the baptism of wind and rain.