高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文章层次较为清晰。

Thanks to my father,in the course of my growth,taught me to work hard.Thanks to my father,in the course of my growth,taught me to be perseverance.If I have not learned it,I may not be able to solve a lot trouble in my life. I was born in the 1990s.That is a difficult time for farmers.Heavy duty work,low income.Although life is hard,my father never gave up.He worked very hard these years.And now,everything is better and better.So deeply I was impressed that every time I met trouble,I can bravely face it.But when I was in high school,I was irritable in face of the difficulties.If I can’t solve it quickly,I will lose patience.Once my father talked to me ,“Don’t be angry.Don’t give up.Work harder and try again,you will work out it!”Since that whenever I want to give up ,I will insist on at the thought of my father.My father in such difficult conditions is insisted, and I face so little difficulty to give up?No.I want to be as brave as my father.Work hard and don’t give up,I finally learned it. What a lucky thing for me to have such a father.It is he that gives me courage to face difficulties alone one after another.