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Dear David: I am glad receive yours letter and know you will come to china. That I know you want to study chinese and I think that is no easy.But just you study hard away,I believe you can come ture. That fundation of study chinese I just can tell you more and more reading. If you have any difficult and welcome to you find me. I will help you be my best and finally I hope you can come true your mind and body health.I look forward can meeting you at last time.
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