考研作文：关于领导

文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

In accordance with what is detailedly demonstrated in the above bar chart,we can observe distinctly that some tremendous changes have taken place with regard to university graduates's expected income.Based upon the data which is provided,folks can see that the expected income by the month has been on a steady decline.In the year of 2008,it was as much as 3,100 RMB,while it went sharply down to 2,700 RMB in 2010.In the meantime however,college graduates's real income has witnessed little change. It is no difficult to put forward some factors contributed to the phenomenon.To begin with,it is with the rapid development of the Chinese higher education that the number of university graduates has been growing significantly.To put it in another way,the competition of the job market has been increasingly fierce.Furthermore,we must admit that growing number of graduates have turned down-to-earth and taken a rational and objective attitude towards their ability and value.Finally,the fact cannot be ignored that the young have come to place more emphasis on the choice of lifework instead of monetary rewards alone. Considering what has been argued above,we may safely come to the conclusion that this trend is normal and therefore acceptable.Accordingly,it is of no necessity for the public to regard it with too much anxiety.