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高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:15浏览次数:11033
要求:
假如你是一位足球爱好者,请你根据下列要点提示,以“My favorite sport”为题写一篇110词左右的短文。
1 踢足球是你的最大爱好;
2 一次偶然的机会让你爱上了踢球;在回家路上捡到一个足球,然后就和朋友们一起玩,从此深深地爱上了踢球;
3 经常和同学一起训练和比赛;
4 最喜欢的足球明星是英国的贝克汉姆;最大的愿望是成为一名职业足球运动员。
参考词汇: 偶然 by chance 职业运动员 a professional football player
用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
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句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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It is universally acknowledged, ambition is important. Everyone should have ambition because it can not only give you courage to hold on, but also show you the way when you get lost in this complicated world. It is so hard to realize for us that we need help of others. The roots of my ambition are my parents. It is generally recognized that parents play a vital role in our development. My parents not only give birth to me, but also bring me up and have a great influence on me. As a student, I strongly feel that my parents have an effect on my behavior and personality. First of all, I live in a world of kindness, love and responsibility of the family, I become a healthy and honest man in my growth. During my hard time, my parents´ love and support have always been my power. And I hope in future I will be able to reply them. Second , my parents always talk to me that I should make something of myself and have a little ambition, which I will hear all my life. Parents are our first teachers, and even our lifelong teachers. So our parents will constantly influence our qualities and behaviors. They play a vital role in our development.

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