句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
It is universally acknowledged, ambition is important. Everyone should have ambition because it can not only give you courage to hold on, but also show you the way when you get lost in this complicated world. It is so hard to realize for us that we need help of others. The roots of my ambition are my parents. It is generally recognized that parents play a vital role in our development. My parents not only give birth to me, but also bring me up and have a great influence on me. As a student, I strongly feel that my parents have an effect on my behavior and personality. First of all, I live in a world of kindness, love and responsibility of the family, I become a healthy and honest man in my growth. During my hard time, my parents´ love and support have always been my power. And I hope in future I will be able to reply them. Second , my parents always talk to me that I should make something of myself and have a little ambition, which I will hear all my life. Parents are our first teachers, and even our lifelong teachers. So our parents will constantly influence our qualities and behaviors. They play a vital role in our development.