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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6290
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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Currently, with the development of science and technology, more and more people like to playing computer ang staying at home ranther than communicating with their families and friends, which damage the relationship of themselves. What's more, it will damage the sense of trust between our families and friends and ourselves. In my opinion, we should talk with our friends and parents frequently, which can increase the sense of trust between our families. Futhermore, we should cultivate the habit which it is harmful for us to speak a lie. In addition, some people will tell white lies to you but you don't need to feel despressed. Because they just care for you and want to protect you from damaging on the extent. Life is beautiful, that's why we love our lives and stay here. Last but not least, we should try our best to improve the security of the Internet and develop the ability of defending to be cheated in our life. That's the good way to maintain trust. To summarize, maintaining trust is an important thing which we should insist on doing all the time. Don't tell lies and being sincere to others is a happy and satisfied thing. Thus, staying maintaining trust between our families and friends will play a significant role in our life.

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