2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

部分长句用的不错，但从句比例偏少；作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

I'm a girl come from north of China,but I'm really love the scene of south of China,espacelly Hangzhou.Eastlake is the most beautiful view of all I have seen.It can display different view with the various of weather.It really suit the people who are not very busy.Because they can walk around the lake even sit down everywhere they want to appreciate the beautifu scene.Also the beautiful city have many cates,so people can enjoy the delious foods.