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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6304[网页划词已开启]
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

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Currently, with the development of science and technology, more and more people like playing computer and staying at home rather than communicating with their families and friends, which damage the relationship of themselves. What's more, it will damage the sense of trust between our families and friends and ourselves. From my own perspective, we should talk with our friends and parents frequently, which can increase the sense of trust between our families. Furthermore, we should cultivate the habit because it is harmful to us to speak a lie. In addition, some people will tell white lies to you but you don't need to feel depressed. Because they are just care for you and want to protect you from damaging on the extent. Life is beautiful that's why we love our lives and stay here. Last but not least, we should try our best to improve the security of the Internet and develop the ability of defending to be cheated in our life. That's the good way to maintain trust. To summarize, maintaining trust is an important thing which we should insist on doing all the time. Don't tell lies and being sincere to others is a happy and content thing. Thus, staying maintaining trust between our families and friends will play a significant role in our life.

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