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My dog is dudu. It is a very lovely dog.He is very nice. He is nine years old.Dudu is very fat.He like meet.He is a boy.He is old.But I love it.Dudu I love you.I think you love me,too.He have got lots of children.I can play with them.He like sleep very much when he eat after.