题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
Currently, with the development of science and technology, more and more people like playing computer and staying at home rather than communicating with their families and friends, which damage the relationship of themselves. What's more, it will damage the sense of trust between our families and friends and ourselves. From my own perspective, we should talk with our friends and parents frequently, which can increase the sense of trust between our families. Furthermore, we should cultivate the habit because it is harmful to us to speak a lie. In addition, some people will tell white lies to you but you don't need to feel depressed. Therefore they are just loving you and want to protect you from damaging and cheating on the extent. Life is beautiful. That's why we love our lives and stay here. Last but not least, we should try our best to improve the security of the Internet and develop the ability of defending to be cheated in our life. That's the good way to maintain trust. To summarize, maintaining trust is an important thing which we should insist on doing all the time. Don't tell lies and being sincere to others is a happy and content thing. Thus, staying maintaining trust between our families and friends will play a significant role in our life.