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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者在句法层面做的很棒；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文中词汇表达不灵活，同时存在拼写错误；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
From the surveys of picture ,we can know the higher education have the higher earrings and lower unemployment rates that education is very importent to our career ,we can have a good job ,if we have learn more knowdges.our ablity will get better ,so we should study harder at school.
