题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。
As the contemporary society develops dramatically, a worrying problem has sprung up that the degree of trust among individuals has decreased. For example, when we meet a man begging for money due to his handicapped leg in the street, we are considering whether he is cheating us. Thus, in the business circle, our consumers couldn't easily believe what the merchant has guaranteed. All these problems mentioned above are reduced adverse consequences. Especially, in the corporate world exists the prevalence of dishonesty. Influenced by these phenomena, we, invariably, becoming increasing cautious about other’s guarantee, even a piece of words. Thus, this trend does much harm to the commodity economy. The underlying reason for these phenomena is that current people fail to trust each other, so keeping trust counts most, because the foundation of any relationship, whether it being with a business associate, spouse, parent, client or, friend, is trust. Trust is not something that can be built with quick fix techniques. Rather, it is something that is cultivated through consistent habits in personal interactions.