可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;作者词汇基础不错,高级词汇表达比较恰当,避免拼写错误;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Dear Mr.Wang Thank you very much for having offered me this promising position to work for this best-saling magazine. It never occurred to me that I would have to leave. But, today I make the hard decision to quit it. I have realised I overestimated my adapability. My personnality actully can't match the requirements of this job which highly values open-mindedness and creativity. What's more, the shortage of professional knowledge, both in designing and editing, has influenced my job performance more negativily than I ever expected. I apologize for any inconvenience I might have cause and wish you could consider my request. Please let me know, if there is anything I can do to make the transition easier for the company. Yours,sincerely Ling Ming