文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练。
My friend's name is Anny, she came from American last year. She helps me practising my English a lot. She plays piano very well, and she can swim. I like her, and I want to be her friend forever neither she is in China nor she goes back to America.