从句偏少,同时注意文中一些句子错误;作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇,在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
Hello everyone! Now, look after old man become a important question in the social. We company creativity rebot of comply the demand of society. Rebot the main function has doing some housework in fixed time, time can adjust according need and chat chese or sport with old man.That's can deal with event in time , such as call phone to hospital when old man illness. This's rebot of we company, I look forward to that can help you in you live.
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