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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用高级词汇，望继续努力；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量。
With different quite opposite attitudes towards the water left in the bottle:optimistically,one considers as it god-blessed gift, the other one consider as it a broken hope. A good spirit always brings fortune,a bad one instead.As a classic saying delivered by a notable philosopher goes: life is a mirror.which means what we gain from life depend on what we put into it. i can think of no better exemplification to extend my points of my classmates who born about the time that his mother died in a poor family,barely can he eat a fool supper, while has been put in such a dilemma he always smile to the world ,and the world gain him encouragement and optimism which is the biggest fortune. Maybe you can not encounter flowers and applauses everywhere,we can enjoy each drop of water in the bottle,dare any difficulties,to gain our sunshine.
