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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33612
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇基础不错,高级词汇表达比较恰当,避免拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

Every small detail in life could hlep us save money,while simply benefiting from the coupons,promotion,or group-price is not smart. There is a hidden side of coupons and promotion usually ignored by consumers when they consume.We are likely to buy something unnecessary when we purchuse and even consider that we've largely saved.The sellers just capitalize this kind of psycology ,and then we make it.On the other hand,the advisable approaches to thraft are:budgeting your money,making a list before purchasing,choosing the goods you really need and remain your account valued. A smart consumer should be the one knows how to scientifically manage but not how to reduce expenses in daily life.

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