2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and Man Computer is a tool whose aim is to help us work well. Nowadays,computers have become a part of our lives and play more and more important role.In the one place,it can help us work and solve these problems we run into in work,improving us work efficiency.In the other place,it can relax us lives,such as watching a film and playing computer games.By the computer,we can do a lot of things and get all kinds of information when we are at home. However,two coins have two faces.The disadvantage of these computers is the fact we lost in virtual world.First,We make net friends but ignore friends in real world and our family.The worst,the fact that some people are totally addicted to the virtual Internet lead to many crimes.The harmful information,which broadcast violent,pornographic model and so on,make some people commit crimes. Computer is only a tool serviced for people rather than control our thoughts and lives.As a result,we take advantage of it and make our life better that is our real aim.