2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；请作者增加词汇丰富度；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

My hometown is a pretty city in my heart. I will take him to see Boao Asia BBS when my best friends want to visit my hometown.Why do i want to take him to that? Because there's a phrase is said so Boao is Asia's.Xi Jinpin President will come that with every president of Asia's country and I think that so greatful.All in all, my hometown is beautiful, welcome to my hometown very much.