题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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It is universally acknowledged that trust is essential of public interaction.With out trust,there is nothing should be leave behind in our interpersonal relationships.On the contrary,for the individual,we are able to build up a more intimate friendship with others as absolute trust we have.However,it easily destroy your trust more than you build up,therefore, you should treasure it.