2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is a pretty city in my heart. I will take him to see Boao Asia BBS when my intimate friends want to visit my hometown.Why do I want to take him to that? For the reason that there's a phrase is said consequently Boao is Asia's.Xi Jinpin President will come that with every president of Asia's country and I think that so greatiful.All in all, my hometown is beautiful, welcome to my hometown verwhelmingly much.