2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

文章能较恰当地使用高级词汇，但单词拼写检查要认真；采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；从句使用很不错，再接再厉。

What is strange about the harmonious scence in which two students and a elder are enjoy the nature of the lake joyfully,truly,it is perfect if it was not surounded by gabage floating into the lake.The contamintation of enviornment which we depend on to living and developing better do hurt the benefits of human beings,we have to take our responsibilities to preserve it from pollution. Cause that there are two main characters which play critical roles in protecting enviornment from contamintation.For one thing,we did not take seriously the preserverance of enviornment,as a matter of fact,small ,our small deed always matters in every aspect of life,just as the proverb goes: small drops can wear the stone. which means accumulative small deed can be effective.For another thing,educational institution and prevailing media shou take their responsibilities by applealing to citizens to do something conformed to social virtues for that these organization always lead the tide of social comments which can affect the sense of responsibilities of citizens. Empowering to hold on to a harminous, picturesque-looking enviornment in which our offsprings can enjoy themselves in clear silent diamond-green lake ,the moutainous forests or the azure seaside with cooling wind soft their smoothful locks,just imagine the scence,should not we endeavor to do this?The answer is yes.