2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇表达丰富灵活，高级词汇使用也较熟练，要注意避免个别拼写错误；从句使用很不错，再接再厉。

What is strange about the harmonious scence in which two students and an elder are enjoying the nature of the lake joyfully, truly, it is perfect provided that was not surounded by garbage floating into the lake.The contamination of environment which we depend on to living and developing better damage the benefits of human beings,we have to take our responsibilities to preserve it from pollution. There are two main characters which play critical roles in protecting environment from contamination.For one thing,we did not take seriously the preservation of environment,as a matter of fact,small ,our tiny deed always matters in every aspect of life,just as the proverb goes: small drops can wear the stone. which means accumulative tiny deed can be effective.For another thing,educational institution and prevailing media shou take their responsibilities by appealing to citizens to do something conformed to social virtues for that these organizations always lead the tide of social comments which can affect the sense of responsibilities of citizens. Empowering to hold on to a harmonious, picturesque-looking environment in which our offsprings can enjoy themselves in clear silent diamond-green lake ,the moutainious forests or the azure seaside with cooling wind soft their smooth locks,just imagine the scene,should not we endeavor to do this?The answer is "yes".