2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

从句使用量不足，应增加从句和复合句的使用；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较丰富地使用高级词汇；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

The Twitter--Weibo of China’s version has already become a super high way for job hunting in China.Weibo counters can push the “pay attention button” of which enterprise’s Weibo that they are interest.With a click ,job seekers can easily know the newest update situation of their ideal companies.As more and more graduates use Weibo,empioees one after another follow suit ,hoping hiring is more precise and efficient.One hand,they can find job hunting’s personal information in his/her profile.On the other hand,human resources department can acquaintance more infomation about their interests and characters in the online comments.