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The Twitter--Weibo of China’s version has already become a super high way for job hunting in China.Weibo counters can push the “pay attention button” at Weibo of which enterprise that they are interested in.With a click ,job seekers can easily know the newest update situation of their ideal companies.As more and more graduates use Weibo,empioees one after another follow suit ,hoping hiring is more precise and efficient.One the one hand,they can find job hunting’s personal information in his/her profile.On the other hand,human resources department can convenientiy acquaintance more infomation about their interests and character in the online comments.