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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71640
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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从句数量偏少;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇使用较丰富,但拼写检查要重视;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

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The Twitter--Weibo of China’s version has already become a super high way for job hunting in China.Weibo counters can push the “pay attention button” at Weibo of which enterprise that they are interested in.With a click ,job seekers can easily know the newest update situation of their ideal companies.As more and more graduates use Weibo,empioees one after another follow suit ,hoping hiring is more precise and efficient.One the one hand,they can find job hunting’s personal information in his/her profile.On the other hand,human resources department can convenientiy acquaintance more infomation about their interests and character in the online comments.

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