过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用。
Currently, with the development of science and technology, we have entered the era of information, which influenced our life a lot. What's more, the development of Internet influences us much in our life. From my own perspective, there are many advantages which Internet appeared in our life. Firstly, Internet bring much convenience to us for communication. For example, we can talk with others which our friends are in the other country or province, helping stay in touch on the extent. Furthermore, we also can buy some good and convenient products for our friends and parents which they aren't here around you in the Internet. On the contrary, the Internet has disadvantages on interpersonal communication on the extent which it is possible for us to ignore the communication of our friends and families whom is around us. Last but not least, we may be addicted to the Internet which will give rise to lacking of talking with people and can't consider things independently. To summarize, the impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication can be good more than harm. Internet brings the convenience which in the aspects of communication, shopping and working and so on. Besides, Internet takes us enter a new world which make our life become much happier and more colorful.
人气:78发布:2016-08-14
人气:67发布:2014-06-20
人气:66发布:2013-05-23