托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people .in my opinion , i like live in a rural area more. but every coin have two sides ,firstly, living in the countryside ,there are big mountains , green trees and clean water.so the air must be cleaner than in the cities .and big cities normally have so many people which is crowded .on the contrary ,there are a little people in the rural area .we can live a peacful world .but live in the rural area is not as convenient as cities .such as the traffic and some goods we must go out to buy it .secondly ,there have a lot disvantages in the city.one is the price of the house.it's too high ,many people work hard but they still can't buy a house in the big cities.second is the pollution ,air polluction ,noise polluction ,water polluction and so on .third ,i thik living arond a lot of people is not safe.nowadays ,more and more people buy cars in the cities which directly caused the traffic accidents. but cities also have their advantages .all in all .i like to live in a rural area more.