2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

作者词汇表达丰富灵活，高级词汇使用也较熟练，要注意避免个别拼写错误；语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法基础较为扎实。

A number of people who were seperated by many small tiny cells nearby are facing towards the chilly CPUs to communicate in virtual world but not face each other. Conspicuously,this is a horrible depiction concerning worldwide-used technology has an effect on our daily life. Several factors weigh heavily for the chilly relationship kept between individuals who were stuck by the net of technology,yet there are two kernels suspended on the top of the list which should never be overlooked. First of all,the relationship crisis between individuals just as the case of the character of modernized relationship which constructed by net to net of technology which brings not merely the convenience and low cost of communication but also the indifferent attitudes and the distance of each other as well. Furthermore,the overwhelming messages without ample supervising flooding into internet which engaged ourselves into countless entertainment or over-pressed business,barely can we pay attention to whom close to our sides,make full of our spare time,also wear us out.A good case in point is one of my friends who used to dwell in virtual space to play online game all day which resulted in a failure in making at it any useful acquaintance and low grades in final exam test. Actually, it is not the Day of Judgement!What are glad to see is the key word:"conmunicating". If the drastic measures would be taken immediately, just as laying down real-name system to prevent the abuse of addiction of internet,delivering the moderate outlook of internet use and ensuring the clearance and security of virtual space,we will surely face to the pros and cons what technology brings to us and we can get close to the world and our friends.