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I have a good friend,she name's xiao lu ,She like to eat fish ,not to eat meet,we lives nearly,we always go to school together,she is very clever,so she often help me study Chinese English.and she is very wondful for everybody,so everybody lives she very much. We have study for she."good good study, day day up"