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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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作者词汇量积累不错,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;全文结构较为严谨。

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Each person has a different appearance ,while nowadays some people like judging a person by their appearance. Obviously it's unwise .First and foremost, appearance is a part of a person,how do we judge person by it? Appearance isn't equal to someone's ability and the quality.If our society are prefered to smart appearance ,I can't imagine how many intelligent person will be neglected just as appearance.Second , as the proverb says "everybody has the same right",we should pay more attention to their inner world.In history ,our ansester knew how to choose person and appearance was not important.Last,everybody has various rule about appearance so they may have different opinions about the some people just as appearance.Do you think it's suitable? I do think it can bring some problems.In a word,if we want to judge a person ,we should know them wholly.

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