内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文中高级词汇使用较丰富,拼写需要再认真些;语言不流畅。
From:hubin@163.com Date:Dec,26th,2008 TO:KPOsales@hotmail.com Subjuce:establish business relationship I konw your new product of NO.5670 during the exhibition held in New York on Dec 15th to 22th.I very interested in it. So I very preasure with your cooperation. And I hope we can establish business relationship. Lately I looking forward to you reply early! your sincere:hubin