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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文章词汇使用要更加灵活，高级词汇使用也比较灵活；语言不流畅。
From: hubin@163.com Date: Dec, 26th, 2008 TO: KPOsales@hotmail.com Subjuce: establish business relationship I konw that your new product of NO5670 during the exhibition held in New York on Dec 15th to 22th.I very interested in it. For that reason I very pleasure with your cooperation. And I hope we can establish business relationship. Lately I looking forward to your reply early! yours: Hubin
