2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用。
Currently, growing individuals prefer to write the books about the way on success which the market economy is developing rapidly. This phonomen give rise to more and more people republish the books about the means of success and launch speech in modern time. From my own perspective, everyone's way to success is different. Consequently, we can't copy the other person's way which that way brought success for the others. Nothing is impossible and there are a lots of roads lead to the Rome. There is a standard in our mind which it helps us judge the way to success is suitable to us or not. In addition, everyone's standard of success is various such as being admitted by Peking University, gaining the Master's Degree, earning more money are also can be the standard in our life. It is clumsy and stupid while we copy the other's way to success because we are unique and everyone's living can't be copied to live once again. To summarize, we should set the goals of our daily life which it can help us improving and promote us to lead a fantastic life. For instance, studying hard to gain the scholarship and working hard for getting the bonus, working in a world-famous company, studying abroad are also a way to success. If you can try your best, the way to success is your way.