单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Clocks Brown‘s family has 3 clocks. The biggest one is in their dinner room. It's really a big one,about 1 meter wide and as tall as Brown's father. The smallest one is in Brown's bedroom. It is a black metal clock,as smaller as Brown's fist. The last one,of cause,is in Brown's parents's bedroom. It is a red one.Its size is about a dish.