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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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Nowadays,a research about education pays which based on different kinds of degrees got the attetion of the socia.According to that ,we find that different degree has different education pay.For example,the people who have doctoral degree spend more money on education than people who less than high school diploma.And another interesting thing is that their unemployment rate in 2011 is less than the low degree.It's obvious that the high degree actual help people find a better job,and it also make their thoughts more open.In a word,it's true that education could change one person ,even change your way to think things.

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