2015年高考作文优秀范文：给父母的一封信

句法知识掌握不错，但文中从句数量偏少；全文结构较为严谨；文中词汇表达较为丰富，但高级词汇比较少，单词拼写要也加强。

Dear mother： I am writing this letter to you to empress my gratutide for what did you do.with out your help， i would not hade so smoothly and successfully. At the first place ，your health is pretty important value that for our family. I know my mum who is not simple，always still working to night，but i and my dad is worring your health，i will tell you