希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;简单句偏多了;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
I have a good friend. She name is Caroline. She is a beautiful girl. she have a long hair. she have two big and garden black eyes. She like painting and sing. She sing is very nice. We have know for two years. We are go to shopping and go to swimming at weekends. Our character is more moderate, get along very happy. I'm so happy to be friends with her.